jocara's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ransid BETA]

Good Game Man :D

This is a pre sweet game, keep up the good work.

[Pop Them Bubbles]

pretty good 4 a first game.

good job, since your a member of mochiads i suggest you use a mochi scoreboard,
if you dont know how to put a mochi scoreboard into your game go to
'emanuele feronato' and search for 'mochi leaderboards' there should be a tutorial that will help you. also add a sound onto the frame of the popped bubble, this will just add a more realistic audio display. Try applying bevels to your symbols you will find them in the filters panel.
Also did you use the tutorialized / flashkit balloon shooting tutorial thing because the game is very simular, it has the same: score, time, crosshair and rotation and the same sized game width.
good job with it anyway,
fix the things mentioned aswell as graphics and you will have a decent flash game.

UGotFlashed responds:

Yeah I know how to put on the leader board, except I had already put it on Newgrounds when I found out how to do it. And no, it wasn't on tutorialized. Thanks for the review!

[Drone Wars mini game]

not much work done.

cough...tutorial...cough...

[Bubblegume]

clone!

this has already been done and yours is crapper.
i bet you just copied a tutorial.

[Attack of the UFOs!]

a bit shoddy!

for a first flash game this is ok,
maybe you should add some explosion animations + sounds to when you blow up your enemy, and also when you get blown up.
the enemies should fire at you because its too easy.
and when you die you can keep firing up the top of the screen.
you should probably get another tutorial for movement because the ship wont go diagonal.
again for a first flash game this is decent but it needs more work.
last of all, keep tryin, if you keep persistent at flash youll get better and better.
maybe add a more gradients and bevels into your game to add a more realistic effect.

if you ever redo the game add this stuff and it will make it better.

cheers

jocara

[Pock]

fun but been done.

this game is good, i like the character and animation.
its just that games with no music or sound fx are hard to get into.
Ive played a lot of games an awful lot like this though.
its also pretty easy.

9/15

[PoolJam]

pretty good game.

This game has been done before but I like this one also.
the only problem is the balls dont rotate, other than that pretty good.

[neave space invaders]

Awesome work but too original.

maybe you were trying to make it original but you could have added something new that added a WOW factor to it.
none the less I love space invaders so i cant not like this.
good job.

[Piano and Drums]

pretty good

Its not actually a game , more of a music simulator, but i liked it,
the piano notes are all spot on, i could play "aces high" on it.
there should be more drum options and they should be closer together.

[Dress up my frog]

nothing special

shit graphics, I cant tell where the friggen frog ends or begins, the graphics could be smoother, try using a bevel on all of your images.
I cant tell what half the draggable images are because there so shit looking, maybe you should try and redo it like googlerox said, but the only reason that I would look at it then is to blam it.