Score: 8

"pretty good 4 a first game."

submission: Pop Them Bubbles

date: May 10, 2008

good job, since your a member of mochiads i suggest you use a mochi scoreboard,
if you dont know how to put a mochi scoreboard into your game go to
'emanuele feronato' and search for 'mochi leaderboards' there should be a tutorial that will help you. also add a sound onto the frame of the popped bubble, this will just add a more realistic audio display. Try applying bevels to your symbols you will find them in the filters panel.
Also did you use the tutorialized / flashkit balloon shooting tutorial thing because the game is very simular, it has the same: score, time, crosshair and rotation and the same sized game width.
good job with it anyway,
fix the things mentioned aswell as graphics and you will have a decent flash game.

Score: 1

"not much work done."

submission: Drone Wars mini game

date: April 14, 2008

cough...tutorial...cough...

Score: 3

"clone!"

submission: Bubblegume

date: April 13, 2008

this has already been done and yours is crapper.
i bet you just copied a tutorial.

Score: 4

"a bit shoddy!"

submission: Attack of the UFOs!

date: April 7, 2008

for a first flash game this is ok,
maybe you should add some explosion animations + sounds to when you blow up your enemy, and also when you get blown up.
the enemies should fire at you because its too easy.
and when you die you can keep firing up the top of the screen.
you should probably get another tutorial for movement because the ship wont go diagonal.
again for a first flash game this is decent but it needs more work.
last of all, keep tryin, if you keep persistent at flash youll get better and better.
maybe add a more gradients and bevels into your game to add a more realistic effect.

if you ever redo the game add this stuff and it will make it better.

cheers

jocara

Score: 6

"fun but been done."

submission: Pock

date: April 7, 2008

this game is good, i like the character and animation.
its just that games with no music or sound fx are hard to get into.
Ive played a lot of games an awful lot like this though.
its also pretty easy.

9/15

Score: 6

"pretty good game."

submission: PoolJam

date: April 4, 2008

This game has been done before but I like this one also.
the only problem is the balls dont rotate, other than that pretty good.

Score: 5

"right..."

submission: Revenge of the soda

date: April 4, 2008

nice animation work, but I didnt really get what was happening,
I like Coke.

Score: 9

"Awesome work but too original."

submission: neave space invaders

date: April 4, 2008

maybe you were trying to make it original but you could have added something new that added a WOW factor to it.
none the less I love space invaders so i cant not like this.
good job.

Score: 5

"pretty good"

submission: Piano and Drums

date: April 3, 2008

Its not actually a game , more of a music simulator, but i liked it,
the piano notes are all spot on, i could play "aces high" on it.
there should be more drum options and they should be closer together.

Score: 0

"nothing special"

submission: Dress up my frog

date: April 3, 2008

shit graphics, I cant tell where the friggen frog ends or begins, the graphics could be smoother, try using a bevel on all of your images.
I cant tell what half the draggable images are because there so shit looking, maybe you should try and redo it like googlerox said, but the only reason that I would look at it then is to blam it.